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Old Jul 1, 2013, 10:39 AM
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That sounds great! Actually, I went too quickly maybe, and "Dinner Flame" really isn't right because flame is before the possessive, so mine was kind of backwards. "Fiery" captures 炎の nicely.

Also, it occurred to me that you could use "Level" instead of "Stage" for the last one. Since the words are similar, and also closely related to a surface, it could be referring to the first level of the castle, and it could also help to differentiate it from all the other instances of "Stage" referring to a section of the game, rather than a section of the castle.
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