Changed "Majin" to "Fiend" since that's how it goes officially.
Also I disagree about "Makai", that tells nothing to the reader while I think "Hell" (or Underworld/Demon World/etc if you really need to avoid Christian implications) acceptably gives the idea of a 'world where demons live'. It's not a concept exclusive to the Japanese so no reason to use their Japanese word, imo.
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