About your changes SS: ライカ on track 2 is Leica, the camera. There is also a drawing of one in the booklet.
Additionally, I would name track 5 'Children of the Plain(s)', seems more logical here, but it's hard to know for sure what the intention was. And shouldn't track 6 be 'Children's Song'?, you know, so it makes sense. Also, track 9 I think ought to be either 'Bird Tears' or 'A Bird's Tears', so it doesn't sound like it's referring to a specific bird.
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