Hi there and welcome to the forum. Anything Toplan or Psikyo related would be appreciated by me. I'll be happy to give you feedback. How about 'Boss de Ska' from Snow Bros? I always felt like there is some room for improvement soundwise. The composition is great though. Love that negative feel of it. Here's a link to it:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zqN4CmZiRnc
Let me know what you think of it.
By the way, what will you use for improving the sounds?