Some suggestions...
1.07, 2.11 Kikuta's track names are references as usual (
My Name is Legion,
Tiger Rag)
1.29 why "murder"? (事件簿 should be like "case file" "record of the affair", etc)
2.32 should be just "Distant Memories" (なる is not a verb here)
3.05 missing "Queen _Bee_ of the Lonesome"
3.08 this should be "Promise" like 1.02
3.13 likely "Evening _Melody_" or so
3.31 I think plainly "Sweet Reward" makes much more sense given the lyrics?