The PS version looks closer to the soundtrack translations given by both you and the Compendium. Except for that misspelling of "Occurrences" and the spacing issues (seemingly done only to fit it in the allotted space), I'd go with the PS version.
Also, seanne, I never really noticed the "Rhythm of Wind, Sky and Earth" issue because it sounded feasible as a title, like the band "Earth, Wind & Fire".
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