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Yurishizu
I'm not sure why you chose the artist order for the credit links, but they should be in the order of appearance, so for vocalists on this album, Lia should be first. The credits on I've.mu were perfect for this, since they were all in order. I ended up creating a new draft from those credits after doing some search and replaces so that the artist form could process it.
Also, since those official credits used Japanese roles, we should too.
And anytime you find an artist name that isn't in our database, you should provide a trustworthy source for any romanized reading you use. Otherwise, it's best to leave it in Japanese. This might seem like busywork, but we just want to prevent any incorrect romanization from being posted.
Otherwise, the info in your draft was correct.