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Another original vgm concept track. ( Critique welcome! )
Hey there, it's been a while since i've posted anything or wrote anything really.
track 1 track 2 track 3 overworld track I was hoping to get some feedback on this since i'm not exactly sure where else to post it. Sorry if its in the wrong forum. :'C Thanks a lot in advance to the people who take the time out of their day to listen! Last edited by midibarfight; Sep 10, 2014 at 08:42 AM. |
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There's a B in the piano at 0:27 which clashes with the G#7 chord.
Sorry, pet peeve of mine. |
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I was aware of that but i thought that the dissonance was somewhat charming. I guess it's just me? Ahha. :'( thanks for taking the time to listen!
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This is awesome, what a dense and cool mix!
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Wow this is awesome!!! Really love this.
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Thank you very much! Glad you think so!
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Thank you very much for giving it a listen.
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No problem! I love to listening to the talents of others, its truly inspiring. Great stuff once again. I wanna get to this type of level honestly.
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The mixing and playing is great dude. You have a lot of talent. I'd say it's mastered too loud (seriously i put my volume very low and it still sounds loud). You'd probably get more dynamics which could help the overall human feel to the song.
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Thank you for the kind words! And you're right, i'm probably just going a bit deaf so i find myself turning it up a little bit more with each track. I'll make sure to fix that bit on the next time!
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Edited first post and added a few more links!
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