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Old Jul 10, 2014, 11:35 PM
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Default Another original vgm concept track. ( Critique welcome! )
Hey there, it's been a while since i've posted anything or wrote anything really.
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track 2
track 3
overworld track

I was hoping to get some feedback on this since i'm not exactly sure where else to post it. Sorry if its in the wrong forum. :'C

Thanks a lot in advance to the people who take the time out of their day to listen!
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Old Jul 11, 2014, 12:16 AM
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There's a B in the piano at 0:27 which clashes with the G#7 chord.

Sorry, pet peeve of mine.
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Old Jul 11, 2014, 12:26 AM
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I was aware of that but i thought that the dissonance was somewhat charming. I guess it's just me? Ahha. :'( thanks for taking the time to listen!
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Old Jul 13, 2014, 12:42 AM
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This is awesome, what a dense and cool mix!
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Old Jul 13, 2014, 08:45 PM
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Wow this is awesome!!! Really love this.
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Old Jul 13, 2014, 10:19 PM
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This is awesome, what a dense and cool mix!
Thank you very much! Glad you think so!
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Wow this is awesome!!! Really love this.
Thank you very much for giving it a listen.
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Old Jul 14, 2014, 05:28 PM
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No problem! I love to listening to the talents of others, its truly inspiring. Great stuff once again. I wanna get to this type of level honestly.
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Old Jul 17, 2014, 05:59 AM
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The mixing and playing is great dude. You have a lot of talent. I'd say it's mastered too loud (seriously i put my volume very low and it still sounds loud). You'd probably get more dynamics which could help the overall human feel to the song.
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Old Jul 17, 2014, 11:20 AM
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The mixing and playing is great dude. You have a lot of talent. I'd say it's mastered too loud (seriously i put my volume very low and it still sounds loud). You'd probably get more dynamics which could help the overall human feel to the song.
Thank you for the kind words! And you're right, i'm probably just going a bit deaf so i find myself turning it up a little bit more with each track. I'll make sure to fix that bit on the next time!
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Old Sep 10, 2014, 08:43 AM
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Edited first post and added a few more links!
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