[Edit] IN THE FIRST SENSE / AIKE BAND (#196036)

[Secret Squirrel]

https://www.hmv.co.jp/en/artist_Aike...Sense_12098137

@meen cool

Your submission has been rejected.

Type: new draft
Reason: I am sending this draft back to you for revisions because there are a lot of problems that I would like to address before you submit more drafts.

1. I fixed a transcription error that omitted a name and a role header. End result of that is the wrong percussion arranger in the draft.

2. We should credit roles exactly as they appear, with only some exceptions. The following are some of the ones I noticed:
Composer, Arranger -> Composed, Arranged
Director -> Directed
Recording Engineer -> Recorded
Mixing Engineer -> Mixed
Thanks -> Special Thanks

3. There are some missing credits
All Strings & Horns, Arranged by -> These are missing
- When you do these, submit the roles as "All Strings Arranged", and "All Horns Arranged"
Engineered -> It may seem to overlap with Recorded, but it is there.
Equipment

4. The order you chose is mostly fine (composer/arranger, then the performers, then the rest), but there are some odd choices like Percussion Arranger near the bottom. You can change the order they appear by editing the little numbers on the left of each line.

There will definitely be some roles that are missing in our role library. You should definitely use the "Check for Missing Roles" button, and pay careful attention to the messages.

Any missing roles, you can request in the role request thread: https://vgmdb.net/forums/showthread....707#post111707

If you feel the rejection is in error, please post further information or evidence here.